A short Story… by: Pierson Cyphers age 4 1/2

(The following story was told to me word for word by Pierson.  I just wrote it down for him)

The Tree House

By Pierson Cyphers

Once upon a time, there was a storm.  The kids were outside but they didn’t know it was raining because the storm was so short.  The mommy was under the tree house, and I was jumping into the swimming pool past the tree.  Charlotte was in the tree house dancing.  A squirrel was stuck on top of the tree, then “P for Pierson” was on the house.  The squirrel was stuck so I jumped up and put him in his hole where he was safe.  It started to rain a little bit, so some trees started growing on the roof.  We were a little bit happy because we could do everything we wanted. Then Jacob came over and wanted to play with me so I had a birthday party and Bridget and Madison came too.  Them mommy blew a kiss and Charlotte was still dancing for like 40 years! Then my mommy was hugging and kissing me again.

The End

If you like Pierson’s story, leave him a comment please. :)  He loves it when I read him what other people think of his pictures I take, so this will be even more special.  He is very proud of this picture and I think did a great job drawing it, and making a story about it.  Charlotte helped him with the house, but other then that it was all his big ideas.

In case you are wondering, he has a bit of a black eye caused by Auggie’s foot… I didn’t edit it out because I like it. :)

 

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March 6, 2013 - 5:44 PM

Louise Malcolm - Hands down best drawing and story I ever heard :)

March 6, 2013 - 5:49 PM

Carmen McDowell - Pierson – I LOVE your story. So creative and imaginative. Keep drawing and ‘writing’… I think you are going to be as talented as your momma and as smart as your daddy!! (and I don’t mean you aren’t smart Amy)

March 6, 2013 - 5:53 PM

Kristi - What an amazing story, Pierson. “P for Pierson” is definitely the hero! I hope your birthday cake didn’t get rained on. Thank you for sharing. xx

March 6, 2013 - 6:01 PM

Heather Braum - Pierson, that was an awesome story. I loved the parts about the squirrel and the birthday party. But the best part? Your drawing!!! :) Keep telling stories to your mommy and drawing and hopefully she’ll keep sharing them!

March 6, 2013 - 6:15 PM

Erin - Great story! My favorite part was Charlotte dancing for 40 years!! Good job Pierson!

March 6, 2013 - 8:11 PM

Grandma E. - Awesome story, Pierson! I love it! Maybe Grandpa can build you a tree house one day… I really like your squirrel.

March 6, 2013 - 9:08 PM

Cathy Marten - Great job Pierson! Your art work is awesome. Can’t believe you’re only 4 1/2 years old! I have taught writing for years, and you already tell a better story than a lot of my students, and they are a lot older than you. Keep telling those stories and keep your imagination alive!!

March 7, 2013 - 7:32 AM

cathy rice - Holy Moly I like your story even more than the Captain Underpants books! Your picture showed every detail wonderfully. You are now my favorite author/illustrator. Can’t wait for your next work.

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